Chapter
13 :
The day
went by faster than Jim and Dolphy had expected and before the two teenagers
could really decide about what they were gonna do when they met Carren,it was
evening.The sun began to disappear behind thick dark clouds,letting only some
weak rays of light shining through.The weather was dreary and tristless,it
wasn`t raining,but the cold wind blew loudly around the Interstellar
Academy.Inside the big building everyone was getting back from supper and
walking through the hallways,chatting and laughing while they were returning to
their rooms.The enlightened windows were the only things which tempered the
disastrous atmosphere outside.
Jim and
Dolphy were waiting at the place Rakitan had told them to meet Carren...who was
nowhere to be seen.
„Maybe he
won`t come?“ meant Dolphy as she looked around her.
„No,I`m
pretty sure he just wants to give us a short reprieve...“
„Yeah,but
maybe he fell down the stairs and broke his neck?“ she grinned.
Jim tried
to hide his smile.
„Nice
idea,but do you really think now is the time for making jokes?“
„Hey,that
was no joke!“ yelled Dolphy. „It was whishful thinking.“
After they
had waited for another few minutes Jim calmly said :
„Well,maybe
he was kidnapped by aliens?“
Dolphy
looked at him and raised an eyebrow.
„Jim,reagarding
that we`re on an alien planet in a universe full of aliens this
joke really loses its funny part.“
He shrugged
with his shoulders and gave her a sheepish smile.Suddenly a voice came from the
distance,yelling and addressing the two teenagers without a doubt.
„Sorry that
you had to wait,just thought ya might enjoy some of your last time together.“
said Carren with a gloating grin as he approached them with Lenaro by his side.
Dolphy
didn`t know what to say and Jim glared angrily at him.
„What do
you want?“
Carren
crossed his arms and shot him an arrogant look.
„Can`t you
imagine?You were so rash to violate our arrangement and,as you may guess, I
can`t stand people doing that.“
„Well,what
are you gonna do against it?“ asked Jim challengingly.
„Oh,it`s
quite simple.Part with each other or you`ll get the sound trashing of your
life!“
„Okay,that`s
enough!“ yelled Dolphy and stood between the two men. „What`s your
problem!?Don`t you have a private life or some other people you can annoy?Tell me
only one logical reason why you`re giving us such a hard time!And please,this
time I wanna hear something else than the usual I`m great, you`re scum–stuff!“
The mocking
grin which was to be seen on Carren`s face just a few seconds ago had turned
into clenched teeth and a furious look.He was glaring at Dolphy with cold eyes
that almost disappeared under his narrowed eyebrows.
„I`m so
sick of you!“ he snarled. „I`ve never forgotten what you did to me!Ya made fun
of me in front of the guys who used to look up at me!I had to beat ´em up to
silence them.To be ridiculed by a girl,you`re the first and last one who dared
that!“
„Ooh,didn`t
know that having been kicked by a girl was such a huge blow for your ego.I
underestimated the mysterious male pride.“ meant Dolphy cynically. „But what
the heck do you have against Jim?“
„You
understand absolutely nothing!You`re the only two who ever dared to stand in my
way! You,two freaks who`re worth nothing...and trust me,you`ll get what you
deserve!“ he snarled and raised his fist,ready to punch Dolphy as hard as he
could but before he could do so Jim had pushed her away and was hit instead of
her.He sank to the ground and gasped for air.
„Jim!“
As Carren
walked towards her menacingly Jim,who was back on his feet again in a matter of
seconds,threw himself against the taller boy and sent him to the hard earth.He
tried to keep him down but Carren was not just bigger and heavier than Jim but
also stronger.He pushed the boy away from him and pinned him down easily.Dolphy
stared in shock as Carren began to beat him without mercy.Seeing Jim being
punched over and over again brought her back to reality and just as she got up
and wanted to run in their direction to help him someone grabbed her and hold
her left arm tightly behind her back.
„Not so
fast,chick.“ meant Lenaro whom she had almost forgotten to be there as well.
As she
heard Jim yelling in pain a sudden power raised inside her and she pushed her
elbow with all her strenght in Lenaro`s stomach, which caused him to lose the grip
on her in an instant.To make sure he wouldn`t hinder her from helping Jim again
she landed him a right hook so that he fell on the ground unconsciously.
„Don`t mess
with a freak.“ she grinned but quickly remembered that somebody needed her.
„Jim...“
She ran
towards the two fighting boys and hit Carren hardly with her fist in his
face.He didn`t expect such an attack since he was too busy with beating his
victim,so he backed away from them astonished.Dolphy kneeled down to Jim to see
if he was okay...He was in a pretty bad shape.
„Jim,how
are you?“ she asked concerned.
He was
still lying on the ground and trying to ignore the pain in his body.
„Ow,don`t
fuss.Just a few bruises.Not enough to finish me off.“
„You...“
began Carren as he realized what had just happened.
„No,YOU!“ interrupted him Dolphy with a loud and icy voice. „Who do you think you are!? You can`t threat us like that!“

„Oh,yes,I
can!“
„Wake up
from your sick lil` dream!We don`t live in the Stone Age anymore,you can`t get
rid of people just ´cause ya don`t like ´em!“
„You don`t
know how to pick your enemies,do ya?“ snarled Carren and walked towards Jim and
Dolphy.
„Hey,Hawkins,you
wanna hide behind your girlfriend?“ he asked mockingly.
Jim
clenched his teeth and tried to stand up but Dolphy lay her hand on his
shoulder and gave him a look that clearly said `No`.
„Touch him
one more time and I`ll scratch your eyes out!“ she meant coldly.
„You wanna
threaten me?“ laughed Carren.
The next
thing he saw was Dolphy`s fist smashing into his face so that he tumbled a step
backwards.Before he could react she had jumped on him so that both fell on the
ground. Although she was fighting him with all her might,the adrenaline rush
didn`t help against Carren`s strenght,he was one of the best sportsmen of the whole
academy after all.He didn`t have a problem with getting her off of him and
punched her so hard that she crashed onto the earth and lay there completely
dazed.
„Dolphy!“
shouted Jim and finally managed it to get back on his feet.
He grabbed
Carren by the collar and smashed him to the ground.He gave him some hard blows
with his fists but then the bigger guy kicked him away from him,stood up and
took something out of his trouser pocket.
„That`s
enough!“ he snarled furiously and pointed his penknife at Jim. „I`m gonna end
this here and now!“
„You`re
insane!“ yelled Jim shocked and the next moment he was harshly attacked by him.
Carren
waved his weapon around,eager to hit his rival,no matter where.Jim did his best
to dodge his strokes but then the blade of Carren`s knife slashed against Jim`s
left upper arm.He cried out because of the sudden pain and pressed his other
hand on his bleeding wound.
„Carren,STOP!!!“
shouted Dolphy as she saw what he had done.
Jim got
hold of him,punched him in the stomach but Carren clutched the knife so firmly
that he couldn`t snatch it from him.The tall boy made a sudden move and pushed
his knife against Jim,leaving a deep cut on his right thigh.The moment he
wanted to finish him off a loud and authoritarian voice came to his ears.He
turned around and was so shocked that he let his knife fall to the ground.
„Lerequin!“
„Mister
Lerequin.“ corrected the big shark-like principal of the Interstellar Academy
who was standing a few metres behind him.
„What the
heck ar you doing here!?“ gasped Carren.
As he
noticed that he was accompanied by a person he knew only too well,a hint of
realization appeared in his eyes.
„Rakitan!You-you
traitor!Oh,I swear you`re gonna regret that!I-„
„You won`t
do anything!“ interrupted him the principal.
Before he
continued talking he shot a look at Dolphy,who had went to Jim to examine his
injuries.
„Are you
both okay?“
„Yes,sir,more
or less.“ answered Jim through gritted teeth.
“Miss
Dolphers,be so nice and take Mr.Hawkins to the infirmary.”
Dolphy
nodded.
„Sir,“ she
said ,“it was Carren.He-„
„I know
what he did.Your friend here has told me everything what happened.“
Carren
balled his fists and looked at the Kimanakan,ready to kill him right away.
„You know
that I can`t tolerate such an impertinent and violent behaviour at my academy.“
spoke Mr.Lerequin,attracting Carren`s attention back to him.
„So what?“
he meant cooly. „What are you gonna do?Kick me out?I guess not since I`m sure
you wanna keep getting financial support from my family.“
„Mr.Gaston,apparently
you don`t know how serious your situation is.I got a message from your father
some days ago.“
„My
father!?Wha-„
„Your
father`s business went busted,so it will be no surprise for you that he won`t
be able to pay for your stay here.“
Although
Dolphy could only see Carren`s back,she knew that the look on his face as he
had heard the news would be priceless.
„I decided
not to tell you about but to keep an eye on you since I wanted to see if you`re
worth staying a student here.But now,since I have heard about how you have
terrorized your classmates and especially these two here,I`m more than willing
to tell you to get out of here!“
Carren
looked as if he`d just seen a ghost.Then he turned back to Dolphy and Jim.
„I swear
I`m gonna get ya!...And you,too!“ he snarled towards Rakitan.
„Enough!“
shouted Mr.Lerequin. „Nobody here has to listen to your stupid threaths!The
police will be here soon.“
„Police!?“
„Yes,you`ve
heard me right!Beating and attacking other people with a knife is a crime and
you`re gonna pay for it.”
As the
principal shouted at Carren Lenaro,who wasn`t unconscious anymore and had heard
everything,tried to sneak away unnoticed but Rakitan stood in his way.
“You don`t
go anywhere.” he said,what grabbed Mr.Lerequin`s attention.
“Oh,I had
almost forgotten about you.” said the big shark-like creature. “You come
with me,too.I`m sure the officers have some questions for you.”
Then he
turned to Jim and Dolphy.
“I`m gonna
tell your teachers that I gave you time off for tomorrow.I`m sure you can need
some relaxation after all this fuss.”
“Thank you,
sir.” said Jim.
“Don`t
mention it.”
With that
the principal took Carren and Lenaro firmly by the arm and led them to his
office where he had told the officers to meet him.After they were gone Rakitan
ran to Dolphy who was holding a nearly unconscious Jim in her arms.
“Oh,man,he
got beaten really bad,didn`t he?”
“Yeah.”
responded Dolphy quietly while removing some wisps of hair from his face.
“Rakitan,I…I
wanna thank you.”
“Forget
it.I should have done that a lot earlier…“
“But if you
hadn`t told the principal then Carren would have killed Jim!I-I tried to help
him but Carren had that knife and then he hit Jim and-and I couldn`t do
anything against it and-“
“Hey,”
meant Rakitan soothingly,”you know what he`s able to do.He`s one,if not the
best sportsman of this academy,I`ve seen him beating many other boys and trust
me,they`re very strong but even they had no chance against him.I can imagine
that it was terrible for you to be so powerless but it`s nothing you have to be
ashamed of. Everything turned out all right.Carren will never threat you again
and I`m convinced that your friend will be feeling better soon.”
Dolphy
smiled.
“Yes,he`s a
pretty though guy.”
“I`ve heard
that,Dolph.” whispered Jim who had suddenly opened his eyes.
“Well,it`s
true!” she grinned.
“I wanna
thank you,too,Raki.” he said weakly.
“No
problem.I`m glad I could help.”
“But what
about you?I mean…uh,did you tell Mr.Lerequin everything that happened
or-“
“You mean
if told him that I was on Carren`s side at the beginning?”
Jim and
Dolphy nodded.
“Let`s put
it this way,I will be quite occupied with mopping the hallways for the next
month. Lerequin said that he wouldn`t tell the police about me having been a
backer of Carren since I helped clearing up everything.I heard that Carren was
a thorn in his side ever since he joined the academy but he couldn`t do
anything against him ´cause his parents supported the academy with considerable
amounts of money.”
“It`s
disgusting how much power people get through that stupid money.” meant Dolphy
bitterly.
“Yes,but
that`s the world we`re living in.” said Rakitan matter-of-factly.
“Uhm,you
did really much for us but...can I ask you to do me another favour?” asked
Dolphy.
“Sure,what
is it?”
“Can you
help me getting Jim to the infirmary?”
“No
problem.”
“Oh,yeah, problem!”
interrupted Jim the two. “Firstly,I can walk myself and secondly, I won`t
go to the infirmary!”
While
Rakitan looked at him kinda confused, Dolphy took Jim firmly by the shoulders
and pressed him against her chest.
“Jim,please,I know that you don`t like doctors but for heaven`s sake,don`t be so stubborn. You have to go there only this time, just to make sure you don`t have any inner injuries. Please, I`m worried about you.” she said softly.

Jim realized
that she was right,he wasn`t in a good state and the cuts on his arm and thigh
were rather deep and still bleeding…and he didn`t want to worry Dolphy.
“Okay,” he
sighed,”if it means so much to you.”
These words
took a load off her mind and she hugged him even harder.
“Ouch!Dolph,I-“
“Sorry!Sorry…”
she yelled alarmed. “I didn`t wanna hurt you,sorry that I-“
“Dolphy!It`s
okay.” he interrupted her. “It`s okay.”
Rakitan
helped her as he had promised to get Jim to the infirmary.Dr.Keerano, a wise
and old wolf-like alien with grey fur and thick glasses, looked quite friendly
in Dolphy`s opinion.Jim however still didn`t seem to be overly excited.But
nevertheless he let him examine his wounds patiently while his friends were
sitting in the waiting room.When the doctor was done he told Dolphy that he had
to stitch Jim`s cuts and that he got off lightly since there were no inner
injuries, just a few but admittedly big haematomas on his belly.He gave him
some medicaments against the pain and ordered him to take them twice a
day.After he had said goodbye to the three teenagers Rakitan left them and got
back to his,now empty,room.Back in their own room Dolphy led Jim to his bed,
although he repeated that he could do it by himself.Shortly after they had come
inside they we`re welcomed by Morph who had been waiting longingly for their
return.The little shapeshifter licked the cheeks of both eagerly until Dolphy
told him that Jim would need to rest and forced her friend to lay down.
“Dolph, I`m
fine.Really.Can`t I get up again?”
“No.” was
the short answer.
“No.No.No.”
chirped Morph.
“But…aww,c`mon.It`s
not that I`m sick to death, just some bruises.” he pleaded.
“Well,okay.”
sighed Dolphy. “But please don`t overstrain yourself.”
“Sure.”
said Jim and sat on the edge of the bed.
“Jim?” she
asked quietly.
“Hhm?”
“Why don`t
you like going to the doctor.What`s the reason?”
He stared
at the ceiling and shrugged with his shoulders.
“It`s
nothing of importance, I…ya know,I`m a bit touchy when it comes to those
things.”
“Which
things?” asked Dolphy curiously and sat beside him.
“I-uh,I
have a problem with people touching me.Especially strange ones.I..I just can`t
stand it.”
“Oh…I
didn`t know that.” she meant a little intimidated and looked at the floor.
“Sorry if I have made you feel uncomfortable in a way, I-I didn`t know that you
don`t like being touched…”
“Aww,no,it`s
not like that.”
Jim moved
nearer to her and put his arm around her shoulders.
“Yeah, I
usually do feel uncomfortable…but not when you touch me.”
He lifted
her chin with his fingers so she was now directly looking into his clear blue
eyes.
“Being
touched by you is the greatest feeling I ever had, it`s something I would never
want to miss.I love it…´cause I love you.” he smiled and kissed her softly.
Her whole
body relaxed as she felt his tender lips touching her own, lightly at first,
soon more passionately.She flung her arms around his neck, returning the kiss
gratefully, while Jim pressed her close to his heart.The only reason why they
stopped after a while was because they had to take in some air.She leaned her
head against his shoulder, closing her eyes and contently enjoying the warmth
and safety of his body.Jim buried his face in her long brown hair, stroking her
back lovingly with his hands.The steady and soft beating of his heart had such
a reassuring effect on her that she almost drifted to sleep but the desire to
feel him, to touch him and to look at him kept her awake.Dolphy slowly
reclined, while Jim was still holding her in his arms, and stared at him like
in trance, stared in his beautiful ocean blue eyes which were shining with that
glint of kindness, tenderness and courage, just like they had when she had met
him for the very first time.She touched his cheek with her hand, caressing it
softly as he leaned his face against it.
“I love
you,too.” she said quietly.
The smile
that was appearing on Jim`s face said more than words could ever do.He kissed
her gently on the forehead and hugged her tightly, wanting to never let go
and longing to feel her heartbeat and
her body against his.The desire to stay in his arms forever grew deep inside of
her,getting stronger with every moment that passed.She loved him.
Outside the
stars were shining brightly on the sapphire night sky, looking like millions of
tiny and sparkling diamonds on dark-blue velvet.Unlike many nights before there
was no single cloud to be seen anywhere,no flashes were interrupting the
silence and no wind was disturbing the peace of the night.The brilliance of
Crescentia, hundreds of miles away but seeming yet so near, was reflected in
the glittering water and on the leaves of the tress, like a light of hope
shining in the darkness.Through the window the soft light touched the two
sleeping forms that were lying together in a bed, resting peacefully in the others
arms.
In the
morning :
When Dolphy
opened her eyes she noticed that Jim, who was still holding her gently in his
arms, was already awake and gazing dreamily at her.
“Good
morning.” he said with a soft smile on his face.
“Morning,
Jim.” smiled Dolphy and kissed him on the mouth.
“Heh,that`s
what I call a good start in the day.” he grinned.
All of a
sudden Dolphy sat up and stared at the clock on the wall with wide eyes.
“Oh my
God!”
“What!?”
“The
lessons started almost two hours ago!The teachers are gonna kill us!No,killing
would be too easy,they`re gonna torture us with extra work and bad grades and
forcing us to do reports in front of the whole class and-“
“Uhm,Dolph?”
“- we`ll
have to listen to that The youth of today has no discipline-speech over
and over again, teachers don`t ever forget about students coming too late,
they`ve got a memory like elephants and-“
“Dolphy?”
“- I have
missed math and chemics,well,okay,not that bad theoretically,but those teachers
are the worst of all and they are cruel,I mean really cruel and don`t
wanna think about what they`re gonna do to punish me for not coming to their
lessons and-“
“Dolphy!!!”
“WHAT!?”
“We HAVEN`T
got any lessons today!Mr.Lerequin gave us a day off today, remember?”
Dolphy shot
him a confused look, then thought for a moment until a relieved grin appeared
on her face.
“….oh…Oh!Yeah!Sure,of
course do I remember,how could I have forgotten something like that,I mean that
would be too embarassing,wouldn`t it?”
Jim raised
an eyebrow at her.
“You have
forgotten it,didn`t you?”
“Yes,
absolutely.” she admitted, still grinning. “So,now that I had this nice little
heart-attack in the morning…Do you have an idea about what we might do today?”
She got a
bit suspicious as he looked at her with a devilish smile.
“Oh,yeah…and
I`m sure you`re gonna love it!”
“I`M GONNA
KILL YAAAAHHHH!!!!”
Dolphy
screamed at the top of her lungs as she was clinging to the solar surfer while
Jim, who was standing behind her on the woodden board, was doing one looping
after another.
“AIN`T IT
GREAT!!!???” he yelled in ecstasy, grinning from one ear to the other one.
Dolphy
didn`t respond, she was too busy with grabbing the metallic bar of the solar
sufer for dear life.Although Jim`s hands were next to hers,also holding on to
the bar and he was protecting her with his body she had never been more scared
in her whole life.Jim noticed that and reduced the speed of the surfer.
“Hey,you
okay?” he asked worried.
“Y-yes…Yes,
I`m f-feeling great!” she stuttered as she was still clinging to the bar.
“Don`t
lie,“ said Jim ,“you`re trembling as if you`ve seen a ghost.”
“I-I`m
afraid of fa-falling down,that`s all.”
Jim lay his
right hand on hers, squeezing it softly.
“You won`t
fall…not as long as I`m here to protect you.But I can understand that you`re
frightened,guess it was too much for your first fly,huh?”
“Well,I
wasn`t prepared for doing loopings in a height of over 400 metres.” she tried
to smile.
“Shall we
stop?”
“Uhm…no…No,I
mean,it`s not that bad after all.But please don`t exaggerate,okay?”
“No
loopings?”
“No
loopings.”
“Okay.And
whatever you do, just don`t look down.” said Jim and increased the speed of the
solar surfer.
He felt
that Dolphy was beginning to get more nervous again, so he leaned closer to her
to give her a feeling of safety.
“Close your
eyes.” he said softly.
“What!?”
“Trust me.”
“O-okay.”
she agreed reluctantly.
“Forget
that we`re hundreds of metres away from the earth.Imagine that you`re on a big
galleon and sailing through the etherium.You`re standing at the bow and letting
the wind touch your face and stroke through your hair.”
“Have you
seen a movie called Titanic ?” asked Dolphy.
“Huh?”
“Forget
it.”
As she did
what Jim had told her, her fear slowly vanished and was displaced by a feeling
of freedom and enjoyment.She opened her eyes, not looking down but up, gazing
at the endless widths of the azure blue sky.It was a breath-taking beautiful
sight.
“Jim?Can
we…try a looping?”
“You sure?”
“Yes.”
“Alright.”
he meant, gained in speed and dashed higher and higher,then flying vertically
and quickly tumbling over through the air.
Afterwards
he was extremely curious about if Dolphy had liked it and asked her
expectantly.
“How was
it?”
“It was…great!!!”
she shouted excitedly. “Let`s do it another time,´kay?”
Jim grinned
happily.
“Whatever
you want.”
Dolphy
couldn`t get enough of solar surfing, she begged him to show him all of his
stunts, loopings, flips, screws and other things she had never known to be
possible.Jim pushed the surfer to maximum speed, flew vertically upwards as if
he wanted to reach the sky and then, all of a sudden,he let the red shining
sail fold up.Before Dolphy could realize what he had done he grabbed her from
behind and put his arms tightly around her waist.As they dashed head first
through the air,rushing downwards to the quickly closer-coming ground, an
unbelievably enormous adrenaline-rush ran through their bodies, making them
yell in excitement before Jim raised the sail again and they flew high up in
the sky.
“WOOO-HOOOOO!!!”
In the
afternoon the two teenagers were lying at the beach they had found only a few
days ago when Jim had searched for Dolphy after she had fled from her
roommates.
By now no
single cloud was to be seen, just the blue sky and a soft wind was blowing.The
sun was shining brightly,making the lilac water of the ocean sparkle and
glitter and sending warm rays of light on Dolphy and Jim.
“I`d never
thought that we would come back here so soon.” meant Dolphy. “It`s so beautiful
here.”
“Yeah,it
is.” said Jim as he was gazing at her.
“Do you think
that we`ll be left alone now that Carren isn`t there anymore?”
“Dunno…but
I guess there`ll always be people who don`t accept us and would prefer us to
vanish from this universe.”
Dolphy kept
staring at the sky and the slowly setting sun.
“What`s so
bad about us anyway?”
“Well,I
don`t know about you but I have lots of bad attitudes.” meant Jim and
grinned at her.
“Yeah, I´m
sure you have.” she answered unimpressed. “Just wait till I`m captain of my own
ship and sail the Seven Galaxies.Then everyone in the whole Etherium will know
my name and those who made fun of me will be green with envy!And I will laugh
at them!”
“And what´s
with me?” asked Jim curiously.
She thought
for a moment and bent over to him.
“You will
be my…cabin boy!” she laughed,stood up and fled from her friend who was running
after her with an insulted sounding “Hey!”.
“You know
I`m gonna catch ya!” shouted Jim self-confidently as the distance between him
and Dolphy decreased.
“Damn!” she
thought as she ran along the beach and cursed herself for being so unathletic.
A short
time later he had reached her and in an attempt to catch her both of them were
landing on the soft light-brown sand.
“Hah!Got
ya!” grinned Jim.
“That`s
what you think!” meant Dolphy cooly, pinned him on the ground and started to
tickle him mercilessly.
“NO!No,that`s-that`s
unfair!” yelled Jim while laughing loudly.
“Unfair but
effective!” she meant and continued to `torture her victim`.
“Please!Please
stop!” he gasped. “Cease-fire!”
Dolphy
stopped tickling him and gave him a moment to recover.
“Okay,but
you have to take me on another ride with your solar surfer before we go back to
the Academy.”
“No
problem.” he smiled.
The sun was slowly dissappearing behind
the horizon of the ocean, its last rays of light turning the sky in a warm
orange and its reflections shimmering in the clear water.Jim and Dolphy were
sailing through the air, steering the solar surfer right towards the setting
sun as if they wanted to catch it before it vanished.Nobody else except the two
teenagers was there to tell them to stop or to complain about their
behaviour.They enjoyed their freedom.Not forever but for this moment, they were
free.
The end
Author`s
note :
Okay,
mates, that was the longest fanfic I`ve ever written…and it took me only one year
and a few months! XP
Thanx for
reading and commenting this story and I really do hope you like the end. ^_^
Now I wanna
give some short explanations about some things in this last chapter :
1.Carren`s
family name is “Gaston” because one of the Disney-villains I really can`t stand
is Gaston from “Beauty and the Beast”.Every time I see him I could smack him in
the face! So he was a great inspiration for creating Carren.
2.Maybe some of you think it`s not logical that Jim has beaten Carren two times ( chapter 1, in the cafeteria ; chapter 10, when Carren was preventing him from searching Dolphy) but had no chance when he was fighting against him in this chapter.Well, those two times I mentioned were surprise attacks and it`s easier to knock off somebody who doesn`t expect an attack than in a fight when he`s prepared for everything.
Guess I`m gonna write another TP-fanfic, just have to wait till I get an idea about what it`s gonna be.Suggestions?